Good job, but I would include some more specific details, like what would cause it to sink or float.
I like your sentences, but you could add more detail. I liked how you included several sentences.
more spacific
Good job, but I would include some more specific details, like what would cause it to sink or float.
ReplyDeleteI like your sentences, but you could add more detail. I liked how you included several sentences.
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