You could use better punctuation. And more detail.
I like your sentence, but you could have included more information about what you learned.
You need to have some more info. I would go into detail
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I like your use of words, but you could make this better by adding punctuation and detail.
You could use better punctuation. And more detail.
ReplyDeleteI like your sentence, but you could have included more information about what you learned.
ReplyDeleteYou need to have some more info. I would go into detail
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ReplyDeleteI like your use of words, but you could make this better by adding punctuation and detail.
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